Speech

Today for writing I wached 3 examples of great speeches. I think a great speech is loud so people can hair. The speech I liked the most was example 2 because it was funny. What I want to work on in my speech is eye contact. 

We done this in padlet the. This  is my exsaple that makes a good speech. 

Kyleys 21st party

"Surpnse!" Kyley's friends and faimily and I yelled. The party was on Saturday the 19 th of July at the fire station. People brought salads for dinner. 

Next the band sung Johnny Cash. Then some people danced on the dance floor.

Then we had dinner. We had salad and pork and lamb. After dinner Kyley opened her presents. I danced on the dance floor with my sister and the we got colourful glow sticks. Kelsea and I were waving the glow sticks around. Then we got the chocolate fountain. Kelsea and I were dipping heaps of food in the chocolate fountain. Then people started to leave. When every boad left we left too. It was fun but loud. 

Achievement

If an alien asked me what achievement is avchie all your work.